Changes in shots-Ideas

Having done a backstory for the detective character, I feel it would be appropriate to add in a scene to my trailer emphasising his different problems, such as alcoholism, therefore making him more believable as a rugged hero protagonist who has lost his way in life. The scene will be revolved around him at work, with a medium shot of him sitting at his desk looking at different case files, we will then see him take out a hip flask full of what the audience will presume is alcohol and start drinking it-close up shot. He will then look down at an object in his hand-a locket, with his wife and daughter's photo in- close up over the shoulder shot of this picture. Then there will be a medium shot of him from the front looking at his desk, this is then replace by a high angle shot which will show a picture of Ellie Dean and her family on the desk. Then the camera will pan out to see him in a rage of fury, smashing things up and throwing things off his desk. This I believe will add much more realism to the character as a real person, and help the audience to empathise with his situation. This will be the last shots the audience will see to end my trailer.